Grave Matters

Posted on December 6, 2010 6:01 am under Microfiction
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Now do you believe me, Stan? We should have taken a cruise with that money you spent on perpetual care.


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13 Responses to “Grave Matters”

  1. Greyscale Territory Says:

    Wonderful dry humour! Love the "if only" regret!

  2. Madeleine Says:

    Ooh I like it! :O)

  3. Cheryl Says:

    Yep. She's right. If that's perpetual care, I'd hate to see what no care looks like.

    I'm new to this: Irony.

  4. SouthLakesMom Says:

    Ha Ha Ha! She still nags him from the grave!

  5. Peggy Says:

    I agree, they should have gone with the cruise.
    Really nice!

  6. nimaruichi Says:

    Leave him alone, at least now! :)
    Liked it.

  7. EG Wow Says:

    Tee hee! Yeah, a cruise would have been way more fun! How come SHE's always right? LOL

  8. KB Says:

    Very good. Have a great week.

  9. sylviamorice Says:

    I agree–cruising would have been a much better choice!
    Have a great week. Cheers!

  10. sylviamorice Says:

    Just an added note that I had a real problem reading the text on your page because of the green background and little pictures….maybe it's just my old eyes, but thought I'd let you know…

  11. Grandma Says:

    I've got old eyes too. Normally the background is light pink with dark green text. Every once in a while, things are really slow loading. Sorry that happened to you, but glad that you managed to read it anyway.

  12. 5thsister Says:

    Hee hee hee! Yes, cruise trumps "perpetual care" for sure. Looks like Stan and his bride got scammed. BTW, mine has a similar title.

  13. Diane Says:

    Too late now…. oh well. Good one! :O)