Shouldn’t Have Asked

Posted on May 28, 2011 11:59 am under Microfiction
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A rosy posy for your thoughts.
Your nerves are really tied in knots.

Cheer from beer has made you stink.
Only cold showers follow that drink! (140)
 

Grandma

Succinctly Yours offers a weekly photo and word as inspiration for your microfiction. How low can you go? Choose the 140 character or 140 word option.

This week’s word was kink. The kink in this one is implied!

3 Responses to “Shouldn’t Have Asked”

  1. jabblog uk Says:

    Ah, so delicately expressed – but you can see from her face what she’s thinking!!

  2. Kay Davies Says:

    Well done! Love the rhyme!
    — K

    Kay, Alberta, Canada
    An Unfittie’s Guide to Adventurous Travel

  3. Sonia Says:

    Thought the other one was your way of saying you couldn’t do it this week. Ooops. Don’t remember what I wrote on the other one anyway.

    This poem is cute! Like the rhyme.
    I nominated you for the versatile blogger award: http://storytreasury.wordpress.com/2011/05/26/i-am-a-versatile-blogger