Posted on September 26, 2011 11:13 pm under Microfiction
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“I’m going to get the leaf bags. You kids stay out of those leaves.”

“Yes, Dad.” (81)

Jim really admired his little sister’s fighting spirit.

Jim was mired in leaves. Her big brother was sweet, but wimpy. (118)



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This week’s word was mired.

4 Responses to “Irresistible”

  1. Sonia Lal Says:

    Those kids obeyed well. Not! LOL

  2. Helen Says:

    Naughty kids!

    Oh poor Jim, maybe he was just being kind by letting his sister cover him in leaves. ^__^

  3. Pat Says:

    I love the first one—Tell kids not to do something, and that’s exactly what they’ll want to do! the second one is very cute.

  4. Jim Says:

    I like these, GMa. Especially the Jim big brother one.
    Here’s a couple of recent pictures of this Jim’s little sister: