Love Lost

Posted on February 27, 2012 10:57 am under Microfiction
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Immersed in his music career,

Waldo ignored his poor Windy dear.

Soon Winkie wooed her away.

Leaving Waldo with one song to play. (129)

Succinctly Yours offers a weekly photo and word as inspiration for your microfiction. How low can you go? Choose the 140 character or 140 word option.

This week’s word was extend. Wish I could have worked it into my microfiction.

7 Responses to “Love Lost”

  1. Anthony North Says:

    Nicely done, and I love that song.

  2. Lisa Ricard Claro Says:

    Aw…poor Waldo! Your story perfectly matches the photo. And I’m with Anthony — I love the song!

  3. Pat Says:

    I like, no, love, your alliteration and also how you tied your story to the song, “Send in the Clowns.” Great job, Grandma

  4. Jim Says:

    Waldo learned his lesson the hard way didn’t he!
    Judy Collins can do now wrong in my book. Your pick is
    soooo appropriate! Her ‘Someday Soon’ is my favorite!

  5. Kay L. Davies Says:

    So sad for Waldo. Well done!

  6. Mama Zen Says:

    Poor Waldo!

  7. Molly Delay Says:

    It’s name is a pen. It’s being a printer, hooked straight away to my brain.
    If you have any situation that a man are able to do well, I say permit him to do it. Provide him a chance.