Love Lost

Posted on February 27, 2012 10:57 am under Microfiction
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Immersed in his music career,

Waldo ignored his poor Windy dear.

Soon Winkie wooed her away.

Leaving Waldo with one song to play. (129)

Succinctly Yours offers a weekly photo and word as inspiration for your microfiction. How low can you go? Choose the 140 character or 140 word option.

This week’s word was extend. Wish I could have worked it into my microfiction.

7 Responses to “Love Lost”

  1. Anthony North Says:

    Nicely done, and I love that song.

  2. Lisa Ricard Claro Says:

    Aw…poor Waldo! Your story perfectly matches the photo. And I’m with Anthony — I love the song!

  3. Pat Says:

    I like, no, love, your alliteration and also how you tied your story to the song, “Send in the Clowns.” Great job, Grandma

  4. Jim Says:

    Waldo learned his lesson the hard way didn’t he!
    Judy Collins can do now wrong in my book. Your pick is
    soooo appropriate! Her ‘Someday Soon’ is my favorite!
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=w70-1b9SCj0
    ..

  5. Kay L. Davies Says:

    So sad for Waldo. Well done!
    K

  6. Mama Zen Says:

    Poor Waldo!

  7. Molly Delay Says:

    It’s name is a pen. It’s being a printer, hooked straight away to my brain.
    If you have any situation that a man are able to do well, I say permit him to do it. Provide him a chance.