Unspoken Thoughts

Posted on November 26, 2012 3:16 am under Microfiction
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Would this trip ever end? Even the dudes with the knee walkers were moving faster than Mom. (92)

Bike rides might be healthy, but not after Mom had bean burritos for lunch. (75)

The cobblestones threatened to shake his sole tooth out of its socket. Didn’t Mom know about suspension systems? (113)

Enough was enough. He’d get a backbone and demand his own set of wheels. Just as soon as he’d learned to talk. (111)

Succinctly Yours offers a weekly photo and word as inspiration for your microfiction. How low can you go? Choose the 140 character or 140 word option.

This week’s word was backbone.

6 Responses to “Unspoken Thoughts”

  1. Akelamalu Says:

    Three great takes on the pic Grandma – I loved them all!

  2. Jim Says:

    Poor kid. 😉 I hope he can hold on until he is big enough to hold his own. At least he is learning the “not’s” of bicycle riding. Also doing it while hauling children.

  3. Anthony North Says:

    Enjoyed them. Indeed, we were thinking on similar lines for the first one.

  4. Judy Sheldon-Walker Says:

    The little guy does not look thrilled at his adventure.

  5. Tina´s PicStory Says:

    how cute! :)

  6. Tina´s PicStory Says:

    and i love your cat walking along :)