She Loves Him Not
Posted on February 11, 2013 9:43 am under Microfiction
Tags: fiction, flash fiction, meme, Story, Succinctly Yours | 3 Comments
He had no idea that his ardent looks were futile . . . or that she’d seen him zooming around town in that blonde’s car. (119)
Thank goodness the theater was dark. Maybe no one would notice that her date had a red suit and hair dyed to match. (116)
She’d send him for popcorn. With any luck, there’d be a long line. Then she could focus on this romantic movie. (112)
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3 Responses to “She Loves Him Not”
February 11th, 2013 at 3:14 pm
A great trio. The middle one was best, I think.
February 11th, 2013 at 6:44 pm
But o Gee, he will miss the best parts of this Chic Flic.
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February 15th, 2013 at 6:11 pm
My fave was the second one, too, but I like her shrewdness in #1 and #3. She’s not going to let a guy get away with anything!