Car-tesian Intersection

Posted on April 28, 2013 12:01 am under Microfiction
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Squash that Bug! (16)

“Your tires need air. Your oil is low. Get a wash.”
He should tell Red to get off his back, but he was too yellow. (116)

Red always vied for top place. (30)

Who said modeling was easy? He should have minded his mother and worn a work positioner. (90)

Succinctly Yours offers a weekly photo and word as inspiration for your microfiction. How low can you go? Choose the 140 character or 140 word option.

This week’s word was vie.

4 Responses to “Car-tesian Intersection”

  1. Anthony North Says:

    Enjoyed both. Great fun.

  2. Pat Says:

    I love your two figures of speech which are double entendres in your second story…so clever! Oh, and so is “top place” in your 3rd offering. Your number one is perfect, and will probably win the prize for Most Succinct this week. Great threesome, Grandma!

  3. Judy Sheldon-Walker Says:

    So cute! I love it. Two cars bickering.

  4. Jim Says:

    I’m still smiling, GMa!!! :)
    My bet is on the Red.
    ..