A Bit Wiser

Posted on April 20, 2014 5:04 pm under Microfiction
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After a valiant effort, Hugo had to admit that Kilmer was correct.
Only God can make a tree.” (95)

Laying in traction, Joe would recall “I was on an even keel, but alas the post was not.” (88)

Succinctly Yours offers a weekly photo and word as inspiration for your microfiction. How low can you go? Choose the 140 character or 140 word option.

This week’s word was keel.

2 Responses to “A Bit Wiser”

  1. Judy Sheldon-Walker Says:

    Grandma, I like your take. Alas, ONLY God can make a tree! There have been many attempts, however.

    Sorry, I went to publish your comment and my screen was rolling so it got deleted instead. I wish there was an “undo” for that.

    Hope your Easter was blessed!

  2. Tammy Says:

    Love your clever takes – both of them!