Moo-ving Tales

Posted on January 19, 2015 11:34 am under Microfiction
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Bessie waddled through snow for a drink, but slipped into the water’s deceptive depths. Mother Nature kept her memory fresh until spring. (138)

“Looks like Bessie fell in the creek, son.”
“Waddle you do now, Dad?”
‘Fetch some strong line and a hook. Maybe we can catch some ice cream.” (140)

Succinctly Yours offers a weekly photo and word as inspiration for your microfiction. How low can you go? Choose the 140 character or 140 word option.

This week’s word was waddle.

2 Responses to “Moo-ving Tales”

  1. Tammy Says:

    Oh, how clever – both of them. Although if it weren’t for the ice cream, I would have gone on thinking Bessie was a drunken woman.

  2. YAM Says:

    Hari OM
    Brwwahahahahahahahah – now that was REAL imagination!!! I totally see the ‘preserved cow’! YAM xx